An Acrostic for Damnation
Gutter-speak spewed he
of the murkiest degree;
fool that I am, I
understood not what said he, so
called he, “patrician/victorian/aristocrat woman” me –
keen of wit and observation? Well, hardly …
you, king of gutters,
ordure and of pee,
understand me here clearly:
reject I here your perverse decree -
“somethin morbid” for to write,
ersatz darkness that is erudite …
leave me the hell alone, you habitual damnation – and
fuck yourself go you for some time eonian.
of the murkiest degree;
fool that I am, I
understood not what said he, so
called he, “patrician/victorian/aristocrat woman” me –
keen of wit and observation? Well, hardly …
you, king of gutters,
ordure and of pee,
understand me here clearly:
reject I here your perverse decree -
“somethin morbid” for to write,
ersatz darkness that is erudite …
leave me the hell alone, you habitual damnation – and
fuck yourself go you for some time eonian.
scribbled on Saturday, April 09, 2005
4 Comments:
damn, and i was trying so hard for it to be "resentful" ...
i think i'm being patronized here ...
oh well, i deserve it, i guess.
you tried to inject class to the resentment in the piece, but ended up bein too cute and petty. this is a failed effort though it is highly creative. anyway, i get the message and i won't bother you again. god bless.
waaaiiit! WTH does "takkan", "tulis la sket.. bunuh2 ke", and "sket = sikit, bunuh2= bunuh-bunuh = snuff" mean?
...
bugger it, he's flounced off =/
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